I search for myself
Lost is this poor creature
Amidst a land of loveless humans
With you far off fro...
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I search for myself
Lost is this poor creature
Amidst a land of loveless humans
With you far off from me
Lost is this poor poet
I search for myself
Into the so called gray matter
Meticulous things it does for everyone
Some very joyous and happy of it
My search is never ending
I search for myself
Like a kid who lost her doll
Desperate I look out for myself
A loss of identity I don’t find
Restless I am without a face of mine
I search for myself
Into the vast stretch of sky
A huge painting with splashes of white clouds by God
Search continues into the sea
Azure land of various creatures
I search for myself
All day and night I look for me
Heaven is not spared at all
There also I go searching
Dancing halls of Indhra, judgment courts of Shiva
I search for myself
Wondering if I am so sinful
Into the depthless, the Earth’s core
Search in the Hell amidst sinful people
Melancholy again I don’t find me
I search for myself
How long this hide and seek?
I am tired and restless
Searching on land and skies for me
Then I realize my endless folly
I search for myself
I search for myself
And reach beyond your deep eyes
In I go with rejoiced heart filled with pleasure
Down below my search ends
There I live in your heart as merry as ever
My search ends here
My search ends here
I have found myself
Rich as a queen in your heart’s abode
Will you keep me there forever?
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thank you for your comment :) I have made the changes
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I read a couple of your poems !! You write very good poetry. !!
There are some corrections you need to make in your poem 'My Search'. 'Disparate' should be spelt Desperate and tried , tired .
Regards
Vijay
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My search ends here
I have found myself
Rich as a queen in your heart’s abode
Will you keep me there forever
Wow!!This so beautiful!!!
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments :)
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Hi Leena,
Yes we continue to search and low for that elusive thing,
well glad you found yours,
whilst I'm still trying :-)
Very nicely put,
- Sudha
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a nice piece of poetry!! searching for an inner soul!!! and succeeded in that!!
enjoyed reading
regards
geekunnel
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lovely poem...we are all searching for something or the other on this planet...lucky are those who find it...
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your search ended???
i search is still on....
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LEENA !!
some times we will have answer at an arm's length but we would be searching in the entire world......
So your mindless search at last has reached the heart where it found the place
nice one.......
BTW
Amidst a land of loveless humans - Y so much of pessimism ??
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