My Search

Apr 22 2008  | Views 482 |  Comments  (9)
I search for myself Lost is this poor creature Amidst a land of loveless humans With you far off fro... Expand

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  VijayPTChary posted 2 mnths ago

Hello Leena !!
                            I read a couple of your poems !! You write very good poetry. !!
                           There are some corrections you need to make in your poem 'My Search'. 'Disparate' should be spelt  Desperate  and  tried tired .
                                             Regards

                                                                      Vijay


                            



  Leenabose posted 2 mnths ago

thank you for your comment :) I have made the changes



  Leenabose posted 2 mnths ago

thank you for your comment :) I have made the changes




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