Part-time Murder

I should say this is a very well written story. I enjoyed reading it. Bit of suspense, thrill and erotic sense in it. Good

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The unexpected

Thank you

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Slowly, He Closed the Door (Poetry)

Well Sopizz good attempt. Specially the flow of the poem is quite interesting. Good work

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My Search

thank you for your comment :) I have made the changes

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I'm your friend

Good attaempt, but would have been netter if there is more rhyme scheme in it

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My Search

Thank you all for the wonderful comments :)

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YOU STILL LOVE ME

A good emotional write. Keep up the good work

Leena

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To Be a Woman!

Dear Divya,

This is one of the best that I have ever read. Good work. You have made many a people which includes me also that we need to have some time for those who love us truely without any expectations.

Regards,
Leena

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The Tale of the Cosy Cottage

Thats a very well written comedy piece. I enjoyed reading it. Good keep it up.

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This is our world

Thank you :)

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